Chapter 9

After reading chapter 9 of Changing Writing, I would definitely go back and change certain aspects of my video. On the surface level one of the things I would have changed would have been the flow of music. I liked the original music I put in, but I would have kept that music for the video clip I added it. I would have needed to learn how to take out their original music and add in my music that was in the rest of the video. Before making the multimodal project, I wish I would have been more familiar with iMovie so I could have made my video stronger and not faced as many struggles while making it. Another thing I would have used is revision and comments from others. It would have been nice for other people to view my video and made comments on what they liked and what they did not like so I could revise it before the final copy was due. They could have helped me by looking at the PACT system and making sure it was very focused on each aspect. Then I would have made a revision plan and hopefully have made my video even better. After seeing what my aemulus had to say I feel like I could make a strong revision plan and correct some things in my video. Some parts do not always flow the best together and I feel that many some slides had too much information on them so that the viewers maybe could not understand what I was trying to say fully. I also could have added a better text color so that it was better readable and also could have gone better with the color scheme. Overall, after reading the book there are many things I would have changed about my video.